Sunday, February 15, 2015

Satisfaction

He wants
the broken girl
from beneath the rubble;
the one that cries each time she begs
for more.

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My favorite poetic form, cinquain.  I haven't written one in ages.  This one seems to have written itself.

2 comments:

  1. I snarl, I hiss: How can ignorance be compared to bliss?
    I spark, I fizz for the lady who knows what time it is.
    I cheer, I rave for the virtue I'm too late to save
    The sadder-but-wiser girl for me.

    Sells more records if you can dance to it, but I know the sentiment well.

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